College Essay

My name is Kiet Lam. I’m attending Madrid Middle School in El Monte right now as an eighth grader. I was born in Vietnam and lived there until I was two years old, when I came to United States. There are three main reasons why California leaders should save me a spot in college. First reason is that college help prepare me for my future career. Second reason is I want to get into a college where I can learn to become an architect. Third reason why California leaders should save me a spot in college is so I don’t disappoint my family.
California leaders should save me a spot in college so I can have a good career in the future. I want to be an architect in the future, but to be an architect I need to major in architecture and drafting which is why I need to go to college. Why do I want a good career in the future? So I can be successful in life. I need a good career to have money to go on vacation and have fun. If I have a family I need money to take care of them and buy them things that they want which is also why I need a good career. California leaders should save me a spot in college so I can have the career I want.
Architecture major have many requirements, architects are required to learn how to design buildings and other structures. Three main things to be an architect is that I need to learn to design buildings that are structurally sound. Second, I need to create structures that people like. Finally, I need to design things that serve the needs of the people who use the buildings or structures. California leaders, please save me a spot in college so I can become an architect.
Finally, my final reason why California leaders should save me a spot in college is so I don’t disappoint my family. My parents told me my brothers didn’t learned English until the 7th grade and I started school in kindergarten. Since I started school in kindergarten, my parent expects me to know English as equal to a native speaker. So, they expect me to succeed and not.